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My class leader
Christine is my classmate and class leader in Nantai. She always helps everyone in class, so I want to introduce her.
She lived in the country when she was a child. Until the age of seven, she came to Tainan. She has no brothers and sisters. Because her parents are administrators in school and her family is democratic, she feel free for her learning. She has lived and studied in Tainan for sixteen years. She graduated from Kun Shan University.
She is interested in playing the piano, studying the mathematics, loving dramas and art. She has a dream. She hopes that she can have an opportunity to work in the theater, play the piano everywhere and be able to join the mathematics competition of world. She also wants to be an English teacher assistant. She is gentle and quiet coping with the features of her starsign, but she has changed very hard for many years, She becomes talkative.
She is a very warmhearted person. She always takes care of everything in class and helps them enthusiastically. Besides, she teaches us who didn't major in English before. She prints an essay from Chang Chun Teng once a week, explains it and wants us to recite. She has many interests; I hope that her dream will come true.
I'm gratitude for Christine's help. I think her warmhearted personality traits can bring her good relationship with other people in the future. I think we will study a lot of things from her in the two years.
Christine is my classmate and class leader in Nantai. She always helps everyone in class, so I want to introduce her.
She lived in the country when she was a child. Until the age of seven, she came to Tainan. She has no brothers and sisters. Because her parents are administrators in school and her family is democratic, she feel free for her learning. She has lived and studied in Tainan for sixteen years. She graduated from Kun Shan University.
She is interested in playing the piano, studying the mathematics, loving dramas and art. She has a dream. She hopes that she can have an opportunity to work in the theater, play the piano everywhere and be able to join the mathematics competition of world. She also wants to be an English teacher assistant. She is gentle and quiet coping with the features of her starsign, but she has changed very hard for many years, She becomes talkative.
She is a very warmhearted person. She always takes care of everything in class and helps them enthusiastically. Besides, she teaches us who didn't major in English before. She prints an essay from Chang Chun Teng once a week, explains it and wants us to recite. She has many interests; I hope that her dream will come true.
I'm gratitude for Christine's help. I think her warmhearted personality traits can bring her good relationship with other people in the future. I think we will study a lot of things from her in the two years.
posted by Eric at 11:03 AM
1 Comments:
Dear Eric:
I am so happy to see your writings, and now I want give you a comment.In paragraph two, "She has no brothers and sisters", you can use "She is an only child in her family" will be better.
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