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1.Chihuahua is divided into tow regions. It is the largest Mexican state. One region is a mountainous area in the west. The other region is a desert basin in the north and east.
Chihuahua, the largest Mexican State, is divided into tow parts which are a mountainous area in the west and a desert in the north and east.
2. Disney World covers large area of land. It is an amusement park. It is located in Orlando Florida. The land lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels and a wildlife preserve.
Disney would, an amusement park, covers a large area of land which includes lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels and a wildlife preserve.
3.Jamaica is one of the world’s leading producers of bauxite. It is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea. Bauxite is an ore. Aluminum is made from this ore.
Jamaica is one of the world’s leading producers of bauxite which is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, an ore, make from this ore.
4. Robert Ballard made headings in 1985. He is an oceanographer. In 1985 he discovered the remands of the Titanic was the ”unsinkable” passenger ship. It has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912. It struck an iceberg in 1912.
Robert Ballard is an oceanographer, made headings in 1985, discovered the remains of Titanic which was the “unsinkable” passenger ship, has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912, struck an iceberg.
5. William Shakespeare’s father was a glove maker and a town official. William Shakespeare’s father was John Shakespeare. He owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon. Strafford-upon-Avon is a town. It is about 75 miles northwest of London.
William Shakespeare’s father was John Shakespeare, a glove maker and a town offical, owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon which is a town about 75 miles northwest of London.
6. The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land. It is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula. This land has been host to many prosperous civilizations. These civilizations include the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.
The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land, located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula, has been host to many prosperous civilizations that which include the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

1 Comments:
Eric, I am sorry your answers are wrong except one. I know you study hard. If you have any question, let me know. I would like to help you. Your grade is E. Good luck.
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