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　 My class leader

　Christine is my classmate and class leader in Nantai. She always helps everyone in class, so I want to introduce her.

　She lived in the country when she was a child. Until the age of seven, she came to Tainan. She has no brothers and sisters. Because her parents are administrators in school and her family is democratic, she feel free for her learning. She has lived and studied in Tainan for sixteen years. She graduated from Kun Shan University.

　She is interested in playing the piano, studying the mathematics, loving dramas and art. She has a dream. She hopes that she can have an opportunity to work in the theater, play the piano everywhere and be able to join the mathematics competition of world. She also wants to be an English teacher assistant. She is gentle and quiet coping with the features of her starsign, but she has changed very hard for many years, She becomes talkative.

　She is a very warmhearted person. She always takes care of everything in class and helps them enthusiastically. Besides, she teaches us who didn't major in English before. She prints an essay from Chang Chun Teng once a week, explains it and wants us to recite. She has many interests; I hope that her dream will come true.

　I'm gratitude for Christine's help. I think her warmhearted personality traits can bring her good relationship with other people in the future. I think we will study a lot of things from her in the two years.

Outline

Main idea
I. Who? Christine where? School when? Sunday

II. Body
Basic background information
From the Tainan country
Lived with grandmother until seven years old
Had lived and studies in Tainan for sixteen years
Family’s typical is democracy
No brothers and sisters

Personal information
Interested in playing the piano, studying the mathematics, loving dramas and art
Be an English teacher assistant, perform piano and be an actor

Writer’s personal reactions
Christine is a warmhearted person.
She helps us study English
She has many interest, I hope her dream will come true.


III. Conclusion
I’m gratitude for Christine’s help.
Warmhearted character can bring good relations for her.Be worth to learning

Description-Draft 1

　Christine is our classmate and class leader in Nantai. She always helps everything in class, so I want to introduce her.
　She lived in the country when she was a child. Until the age of seven, she came to Tainan. She has no brothers and sisters at home. Due to her parents are administrators in school and her family's typical is democracy, so she feel the process of her learning is freedom. She has lived and studied in Tainan for sixteen years. She graduated from Kun Shan University.
　She interested in playing the piano, studying the mathematics, loving dramas and art. She hope that can have an opportunity to work in the theater, play the piano everywhere and be able to join the mathematics competition of would. She also wants to be an English teacher assistant. Because of constellations, she think she is gentle and quiet. But she has changed very hard for many years, She becomes being talkative.
　She is a very warmhearted person. She always cares everything in class and help enthusiastically such as make the desk tidy and clean the blackboard after school. Besides, she teaches us who hadn’t majored English before. She prints an essay from Chang Chun Teng once a week, explains it and wants us to recite. She has many interests; I hope that her dream will come true.
　I’m gratitude for Christine's help. I think warmhearted character can bring good relations with others for her in the future. I think we will study many things from her in the two years.

Sentences combine

1.Chihuahua is divided into tow regions. It is the largest Mexican state. One region is a mountainous area in the west. The other region is a desert basin in the north and east.

Chihuahua, the largest Mexican State, is divided into tow parts which are a mountainous area in the west and a desert in the north and east.

2. Disney World covers large area of land. It is an amusement park. It is located in Orlando Florida. The land lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels and a wildlife preserve.

　Disney would, an amusement park, covers a large area of land which includes lakes, golf 　　　courses, campsites, hotels and a wildlife preserve.

3.Jamaica is one of the world’s leading producers of bauxite. It is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea. Bauxite is an ore. Aluminum is made from this ore.

Jamaica is one of the world’s leading producers of bauxite which is the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, an ore, make from this ore.

4. Robert Ballard made headings in 1985. He is an oceanographer. In 1985 he discovered the remands of the Titanic was the ”unsinkable” passenger ship. It has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912. It struck an iceberg in 1912.

Robert Ballard is an oceanographer, made headings in 1985, discovered the remains of Titanic which was the “unsinkable” passenger ship, has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912, struck an iceberg.

5. William Shakespeare’s father was a glove maker and a town official. William Shakespeare’s father was John Shakespeare. He owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon. Strafford-upon-Avon is a town. It is about 75 miles northwest of London.

William Shakespeare’s father was John Shakespeare, a glove maker and a town offical, owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon which is a town about 75 miles northwest of London.

6. The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land. It is located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula. This land has been host to many prosperous civilizations. These civilizations include the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

　The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land, located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian 　　　Peninsula, has been host to many prosperous civilizations that which include the Kingdom of 　Sheba and various Islamic empires.

How to make laver-egg soup

　The laver-egg soup in Taiwan is very common at a meal. Today, I want to teach everybody how to make it.
　First, boil two cups of chicken broth and add salt to taste appropriately. Second, stir in water to a beaten egg and gradually pour it over the boiling bubbles in the broth. Third, throw in some finely chopped grean onions and dried seaweed. Finally, thun off the fire till the seaweeds become soft.

How a breakfast cereal is made.

The wheat is harvested from the field then wheat grain is transported and stored in the silos. In order to be woven into biscuits, the grain is cooked to soften, besides cut and formed into thin strips. Finally, each biscuit is backed until brown and packed ready to be eaten.