comparision-draft 2

　　Stores are very important in our life. If there weren't stores, we can't buy anything we need. Now, there are many shops around us such as Carry four, Dollars, 7-11, Family and so forth. They can be differentiated the big supermarket and small grocery. There are some different characteristics of them following the price, the service and the fresh. I will introduce both large market and small grocery in these three points.

　　The large supermarkets in price are cheaper than the small groceries. Because we go shopping in large supermarket, we always get the low price. Therefore, we get the high price in small grocery. But there is a thing worth to attention. When we find the dunnage was exhausted at night, will you drive a car to large supermarket or walk to small grocery? Despite the fact that the large supermarket is cheaper, it doesn’t open twenty-four hours.

　　The small shops are better than the large supermarkets at service. Because the small groceries usually are opened 24 hours near our home and is more accommodative, we can buy provisional goods anytime. Nevertheless, the big shops aren’t opened all day and are farther. Even though the small groceries stock less the amount of goods often than large supermarkets and be at the higher price, they provide service day and night.

　　The large supermarkets are fresher than the small groceries in food. The news had ever reported that the convenient stores the lunch boxes are stale and fluoridated antiseptic. It is not good to our health.

　　The large supermarkets are much cheaper and fresher, but it couldn’t be opened twenty-four hours. It isn’t more convenient than small grocery. The small grocery provides good service and convenience, however it has much cost. When we buy something, we should think which one is better to us at moment.

comparision-draft 1

　　Stores are very important in our life. If there weren't stores, we can't buy anything we need. Now, there are many shops around us such as Carry four, Dollars, 7-11, Family and so forth. They can differentiate the big supermarket and small grocery. There are some different characteristics of them following the price, the service and the fresh. I will introduce advantages and disadvantages to both large market and small grocery.

　　The large supermarket in price is cheaper than the small grocery. Because we go shopping in large supermarket, we always get the low price. Therefore, we get the high price in small grocery. But there is a thing worth to attention. When we find the dunnage was exhausted at night. Will you drive a car to large supermarket or walk to small grocery? Despite the fact that the large supermarket is cheaper, it doesn’t open twenty-four hours.

　　The small shop at service is better than the large supermarket. Because the small grocery usually open 24 hours near our home and is more accommodative, we can buy provisional goods anytime. Nevertheless, the big shops don’t open all day and are farther. Even though the small groceries stock the amount of goods often less than large supermarket and get the higher cost, they provide service in all day and convenience.

　　The large supermarket in food is fresher than small grocery. The news had ever reported the convenient stores in lunch box are stale and fluoridate antiseptic. It is not good to our health.

　　Large supermarket is much cheaper and fresher, but it couldn’t open twenty-four hours. It isn’t more convenient than small grocery, too. The small grocery provides good service and convenience, however it has much cost. When we buy something, we should think which one is better to us at moment.

Comparison - outline

Introduce
　　Stores are very important in our life. If there weren’t stores, we can’t buy anything we need. Now, there are many shops around us such as Carry four, Dollars, 7-11, Family and so forth. I will introduce advantages and disadvantages to both large market and small grocery.

Body
Paragraph 1
　The large supermarket price is cheaper than small grocery.
　Life experience about them

Paragraph 2
　The service at small grocery is better than large supermarket.
　Life experience about them

Paragraph 3
　The food in large supermarket is fresher than small grocery.
　Life experience about a meal

Conclusion
　　Large supermarket is much cheaper and fresher, but it couldn’t open twenty-four hours. It isn’t more convenient than small grocery. The small grocery provides good service and convenience, but it has much cost. When we buy something, we should think which one is better to us at moment.

Final - classification

Teachers are important for students. A famous Chinese had ever said, “Teachers teach morals, give knowledge, and solve problems to students”. I will introduce the three types of them.

The first types of teachers are those who hope that students can have well behaviors in society. A person with good behaviors won’t be dangerous to society, but bad one will just do stealing, smuggling, robbery, and so on. When we studied in school, these teachers usually use Confucianism to teach us how to become a good person.

Teachers of the second type hope that students can have professional skills or enter a good school. They concentrate on students’ learning. They usually tell jokes or other interesting things to attract students' attention, and teach class systematically. That makes us get twice the result with half the effort. We usually can get good grades if we study hard.

The third category of teachers is different from the other two types mentioned above. They usually help students to make life happier and go further to plan a schedule of life. At the same time, they help student solve trouble such as failing the exam, having bad relationship with other people, and the hurt of feeling, and so forth. They help students solve these problems and make them have positive concepts.

　　The three categories of teachers have different functions. One asks students to behave themselves; another is giving student much knowledge, and the other help solving problems. All of them are important to us.

Draft 2 - classification

Teachers are important for students. A famous Chinese had ever said, “Teachers teach morals, give knowledge, and solve problems to students”. I will introduce the three types of them.

The first types of teachers are those who hope that students grow up in society can have well behaviors. A person with good behaviors won’t be dangerous to society, but bad one will just do stealing, smuggling, robbery, and soon. When we studied in school, these categorized teachers usually use Confucianism to teach us how to become a good person.

Teachers hope that students can have professional skills or enter a good school. They concentrate on students’ learning. They usually tell jokes or other interesting things to attract our attention, and teach class systematically. That makes us get twice the result with half the effort. We usually can get good grades if we study hard.

The third categories of teachers are different from the two types mentioned above. They usually help students how to make life happier and go further make schedule of life. At the same time, they help student solve confused trouble such as failing the exam, having bad relationship with other people, and the trauma of heart, and so forth. They help students solve these problems and make us have positive concepts.

　　The three categories of teachers have different functions. One asks students to behave themselves; another is giving student much knowledge, and the other help solving problems. All of them are important to us.

Draft 1 - classification

Teachers are important for students. A famous Chinese had ever said, “Teacher teaches morals, class work, and solves problems to students”. I will introduce the three types of them.

Teacher hope students grow up in society can have well behaviors. A good behavior person doesn’t danger to society, but bad one will just like stealing, smuggling, robbery, ……etc. When we studied in school, this categorized teachers usually use Confucius had ever said teach us how to become a good person.

Teacher hope students can have professional skill or enter a good school. They concentrate on student’s learning. They usually use joke or other interesting things to attract our attention, and then teach class work systematically. That makes us yield twice the result with half the effort. We usually can get good grades if study hard.

The third categorized teachers are different from above two. They usually help students how to make life be happier and go further make schedule of life. At the same time, they help us solve confused trouble such as fail the exam, have bad relationship with other people, and the trauma of heart …… etc. They help us solve these problems and make us have positive concept.

　　The three categories of teachers have different functions. One is about behaviors, another is schoolwork, and the other is our trouble. All of them are important to us.

Outline-classification

Introduction:

Teachers are very important for students. A famous Chinese had ever said, “Teacher teaches morals, class work, and solves ploblems to students”. I will introduce the three types of them.

Body:

Paragraph 1:

Teacher teaches us about behaviors

How to become a good person by Confucius

Paragraph 2:

Attract our attention

Teach class work systematically

Get good grades

Paragraph 3:

How to make a schedule of life

Solve many kinds of ploblems for us

Conclusion:

The three categories of teachers have different functions. One is about behaviors, another is schoolwork, and the other is our trouble. All of them are important to us.

Write a sentence to explain the meaning of each quote

Quote:

1. "A student is not a vessel to be filled but a lamp to be lighted.
2. "Nine-tenths of education is encouragement."
3. "To educate a man in mind and not in morals is to educate a menace to society."
4. "I pay the schoolmaster, but it is the other boys who educate my son."

Explain:
1.To change spoon-fed education is useful to students.
2.The most educative methed is encouragement.
3.It is danger to society today reflect failure edcation in the past.
4.Teacher is important in education but the most important is to have good classmates beause good companions have good influence while bad ones have bad influence.

Final

My class leader

Christine is my classmate and class leader in Nantai. She always helps everyone in class, so I want to introduce her.

She lived in the country when she was a child. Until the age of seven, she came to Tainan. She has no brothers and sisters. She graduated from Kun Shan University. She has lived and studied in Tainan for sixteen years. Because her parents are administrators in school and her family is democratic, she feels free to learn.

She is interested in playing the piano, studying the mathematics, loving dramas and art. She has a dream. She hopes that she can have an opportunity to work in the theater, play the piano everywhere and be able to join the mathematics competition of world. She also wants to be an English teacher assistant. She is gentle and quiet in accordance with the features of her star sign, but she has changed a lot for many years. She becomes talkative.

She is a very warmhearted person. She always takes care of everyone in class and helps them enthusiastically. Besides, she teaches us who didn't major in English before. She printed an essay out from Chang Chun Teng once a week, explained it, and wanted us to recite. She has many interests; I hope that her dream will come true.

I have gratitude for Christine's help. I think her warmhearted personality traits can bring her good relationship with other people in the future. I think we will study a lot of things from her in the two years.