comparision-draft 2

　　Stores are very important in our life. If there weren't stores, we can't buy anything we need. Now, there are many shops around us such as Carry four, Dollars, 7-11, Family and so forth. They can be differentiated the big supermarket and small grocery. There are some different characteristics of them following the price, the service and the fresh. I will introduce both large market and small grocery in these three points.

　　The large supermarkets in price are cheaper than the small groceries. Because we go shopping in large supermarket, we always get the low price. Therefore, we get the high price in small grocery. But there is a thing worth to attention. When we find the dunnage was exhausted at night, will you drive a car to large supermarket or walk to small grocery? Despite the fact that the large supermarket is cheaper, it doesn’t open twenty-four hours.

　　The small shops are better than the large supermarkets at service. Because the small groceries usually are opened 24 hours near our home and is more accommodative, we can buy provisional goods anytime. Nevertheless, the big shops aren’t opened all day and are farther. Even though the small groceries stock less the amount of goods often than large supermarkets and be at the higher price, they provide service day and night.

　　The large supermarkets are fresher than the small groceries in food. The news had ever reported that the convenient stores the lunch boxes are stale and fluoridated antiseptic. It is not good to our health.

　　The large supermarkets are much cheaper and fresher, but it couldn’t be opened twenty-four hours. It isn’t more convenient than small grocery. The small grocery provides good service and convenience, however it has much cost. When we buy something, we should think which one is better to us at moment.

comparision-draft 1

　　Stores are very important in our life. If there weren't stores, we can't buy anything we need. Now, there are many shops around us such as Carry four, Dollars, 7-11, Family and so forth. They can differentiate the big supermarket and small grocery. There are some different characteristics of them following the price, the service and the fresh. I will introduce advantages and disadvantages to both large market and small grocery.

　　The large supermarket in price is cheaper than the small grocery. Because we go shopping in large supermarket, we always get the low price. Therefore, we get the high price in small grocery. But there is a thing worth to attention. When we find the dunnage was exhausted at night. Will you drive a car to large supermarket or walk to small grocery? Despite the fact that the large supermarket is cheaper, it doesn’t open twenty-four hours.

　　The small shop at service is better than the large supermarket. Because the small grocery usually open 24 hours near our home and is more accommodative, we can buy provisional goods anytime. Nevertheless, the big shops don’t open all day and are farther. Even though the small groceries stock the amount of goods often less than large supermarket and get the higher cost, they provide service in all day and convenience.

　　The large supermarket in food is fresher than small grocery. The news had ever reported the convenient stores in lunch box are stale and fluoridate antiseptic. It is not good to our health.

　　Large supermarket is much cheaper and fresher, but it couldn’t open twenty-four hours. It isn’t more convenient than small grocery, too. The small grocery provides good service and convenience, however it has much cost. When we buy something, we should think which one is better to us at moment.